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Middle Man

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he's just an intermediary
a go-between the two
he passes on their messages
and mediates miscues

could be called an agent
a middleman as such
whatever his job entails
he really does do much

some say he's an entrepreneur
others call him mad
but cupid's there for the long haul
by him many have been had

Author notes

Intermediary - a person who acts between others to bring about an agreement

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  • Aurielle
    August 31, 2007
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    BY HIM MANY HAVE BEEN HAD...That makes no sense Really nice


  • stavykm gold member
    August 28, 2007

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    So, so cute

    I love your poem is so fun. The title and the first and last line go completely together, very easy to read and understand. I felt like isn't that the truth yes I feel like a mad man myself sometimes working between the 2 whomever they may be!


  • Tamera
    August 27, 2007

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    I liked the rhyme and flow, in trying to choose one part to comment on I find I can't as the poem in its entirety with the choice of wordage and rhyme made it what it is in whole and that is why I liked it. Great job.


  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    August 25, 2007

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    LoL this is so cute,
    thanks for making me smile.
    I love the ending, perfect flow.
    Great piece my friend.

    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    August 25, 2007

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    This is so cute, I love this one!
    Well done and best of luck to you
    with this one in the contest!




    Jeremy0826


  • Onerogueleft
    August 25, 2007

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    Lovely sentiment

    Let us pray and hope that cupid does not get perverted like lawyers have done. hahahahaha. A friendly and pic inspiring poem.

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