He left
Never to be heard from again
No last words
No goodbyes
Severing all contact
With the one he "loved"
He left her alone
Sad
And Brokenhearted
What happened to all the laughs they shared?
Was it because of his children?
Was she too young for him?
She can remember the day she met him
Even though she's found someone new
Someone perfect
She still remembers him
She remembers his smell
His smile
His strong embrace
She remembers the taste of him
She was a fool to believe he loved her
She learned her lesson
Now there's only one
He seems to be The One
She can't live without him
Screw you James
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lol.... who ever "James" is...... he can go die. hehe This was really great I liked it a lot. I loved how it told a story and then connected the story with the personal comment. I did that once... only I ended the poem with ".....I hate you....." instead of telling the guy to baically go skrew yourself lol... good one though. I thought that this was a great write and I really loved reading it.... thank you so much for entering
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loved it..esp tht last line...yh james FUCK YOU!!lol
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