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Dared by Perfection

I dare you

Love me

Destroy me

Obsess me

Possess me

 

I dare you

Heal me

Kill me

Mold me

Make me

 

I dare you

Tempt me

Love me 

Hold me

Never let me go

 

I dare you

Make me perfect

Make me everything 

Make me yours

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  • Something Obscene
    August 28, 2007

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    I'm not going to destroy you, ever.
    I'm not going to mold you, I love you the way you are.
    I'm not going to kill you, I'm not that crazy -.-
    You are perfect to me, and you already are my everything. But its all on you to be mine.
    This is amazing love.
    YOU are amazing.


  • Kristen Corpse
    August 25, 2007

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    Dare away. I agree with Emily, this could be lyrical in some spots. This is actually a very nice write and the custom background you made works well with it. Nice job all around and I am so happy you've found someone who makes your heart beat. Best of luck to the both of you.

    Always and forever,
    Kristen ♥


  • EmilyRoseFrank
    August 25, 2007

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    Oh Kat! I love this! The repeats are in just the right spots. It's simple but the is profound.

    "I dare you
    Love me
    Destroy me
    Obsess me
    Possess me"

    These could be lyrics. Great job!

    <3Em