I want a woman
that melts my heart
when I look in her eyes
I want a friend
who cares for me
as if, I were a brother
I want a lover
who always craves me
who can not get enough of me
I want a face
so amazingly beautiful
I fall in love again, each time I look at her
I want a soul
that touches my own
who accepts me, with my sins
I want a love
that finds no end
and dreams of me, at night
I want you
for all you are to me
the place I keep my heart
I want... My Poet
LeeL
Author notes
For my Amazing Friend
A contest entry
- Let's Talk About Love (Members only For Romantics Dreamers) by jasminerose.
700 points, ended September 21, 2007, 18 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hi Rick;
hmmmmmmm.....
makes me wonder if my.....someone feels this way for me...and if I will ever know....
anyways thank you for the read this day, evening, tonight.
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Very Beautiful!
This is so beautiful and i have to say i pray you have found the person you want.
Congrats on this silver!
I want a love
that finds no end
and dreams of me, at night
I want you
for all you are to me
the place I keep my heart
I want... My Poet
Great words my friend,
Its rare to find such a soulmate.
Love
~Lisa~
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congrats my dear fiend on the well earned silver
xxx
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I had just been writing on your gold...about the wind blowing through the field, pursuing your love....but got cut off...so I will have tind it...All your requests here are so cross gender...we want to be loved unconditionally,That is a powerful love.It is spiritual, and it is true love...that is what you asking for...And she you...It works both ways, and that bonds the relationship..We see past the weaknesses, and see the soul and heart......What you ask is for this, and we all do.....Lovely, Rick
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"I want a soul
that touches my own
who accepts me, with my sins"
Powerful diction and voice here, truly enviable work poet. Well done.
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MJ
Thank you for your kind words
I appreate Powerfull
Rick
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well done my dear friend and having found a true essense who is your poetic soul is a blessing. Much love to you always xxxx
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Luvr
Thank you for reading me
I think by my age, we should know well what we seek
Much of this is very needed by me, by my nature
Kind of you to say much love
Rick
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Nice Rick. Follow your dreams. I still feel your presence. Maybe one day I will again. As you asked me to come back in time.
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My Friend
Thank you for feeling my presences
I was blessed to have know you
You will not be forgotten
Rick
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So beautiful that it touches not only the heart but the soul as well. It is wonderful that you have found a love that is so true. A wonderful work of art you have penned. Good luck in the contest.
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Angel
Thank you for reading me
Pleased you think this is art
Rick
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Hi Rick
Only a sweet soul like you, could write such beauty of the one he loves!!!
So lovely in every way as your heart surely has been touched by this poetic friend and I am so very happy for the both of you!!!!!!
A very beautiful entry for my contest!!!
Thank you so much for sharing!
Linda
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My Friend
Jasmine,
I love your comment
I am blessed to have the love of a poet
few others, would feel my words so well
Thank you for saying Beautiful
Rick
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Hi Rick...
I know of what you wish and dream
and how deeply you will love
in return to the one
who will give MORE than 100%
I believe for every dream we have
there is an answer to it.
I hope you've found yours...
at long last.
Good luck in the contest, hon. And...good luck to both you and your poet. I'd love to see a "happily ever after".
Much love,
~J.
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Hi Julie
Because you know me so well
your comment means much more to me
Thank you for your well wishes
Rick
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Thank you my Love,
for wanting me so, for writing these beautiful words for me, and mostly for giving me your heart.
all my love,
your poet
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My Poet
You are easy to love
and even easer to make words for
When I think of you
I think of an amazing beautiful woman
All my love, Your Rick
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Rick,
This is just so precious.
I am sure your Poet will love every word.
Sending you and your poet much happiness always.
Loveandblessings2u & yours always
Love Ya and Your Poet
Joyce
( Isn't it funny how things turn out sometimes ? )
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Hi Joyce
Thank you for your kind words
Thank you for saying Precious
Rick
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Aw, this is so beautiful
When you write this beautifully I am sure you will have what you seek.
good luck on the contest this is a winner
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Ah, if it were as easy as seeking.
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Words spoken from the heart, just like a lovers plead and confession of the soul. I feel shes engraved within your heart and will be right with the world when you two say; I DO. This is one heck of a love story in verse, your emotions are truly enhancing your talent. Write on dear poet man of love.......novy
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Rick every time i read you always surpass yourself. This is a very exquisite poem and expressing perfectly the dynamics of true love between partners. It should be radiant in the morning and absolutely breathtaking at night. And speak of the highest pleasures. My husband is a rainbow in my heart. He beholds a beatific vision of soulful and emotional beauty. This poem expresses a beautiful spirit.
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Cherche
I like what you said in your comment, almost poetic
I think you are blessed with your husband
Rick
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excellent. i believe these are all traits most human beings want from love. you go down the line and point out some of the most important issues in regards to desire. what makes this end so well is how you pretty much explain to us all that you have found all this..your heart's desire in one precious soul and declare that want with absolutely no hesitation and all sincerity of expression. most excellent
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Hi Joel
There were other verses that I deleated so i would not wear out the theam. I think I covered the essance of what most hope for.
Thank you for saying excellent
Rick
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I love to read your work,thank you for yet another stunning piece...
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Daizy
You are kind to say this
It is wonderfull to be read by you
Rick
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...You don't want much do you?...lol...just teasing, this is tender and sweet as all of your lovely poetry is, Rick. My favorite line is the simplist one...I want you...says it all...in love, in passion, in all the shades of every emotion, these words are only outdone by the other three...I love you...Be well, Rhonda
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Rhonda
My friend, I want it all
To the woman that holds my heart
I will return it all, and then a measure more
Thank you for seeing so well into my words
Rick
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This is great! All of the qualities that we all hope for in a lover. What a wonderful feeling that would be to find someone like that. A really touching write you have here! Great work and good luck to you my friend!
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Jeremy
Thank you for reading me Jeremy
I have this person clearly in my mind
Thank you for wishing me luck
Rick
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