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[ What do you fucking want!? ]

What do you fucking want!?
Can't you stop whispering in my ear,
stop the lies and the screaming?

Why do you disturb my sleep?
Why do you tell me those things?

The tears have started again,
the wounds are still fresh.

For fuck sake just stop it,
just get out of my head,
leave me the hell alone,
your not wanted anymore!


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  • tSkye
    August 29, 2007
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    ooohhh deep.... hope ur ok??
    u know where i am if u need me..
    lovin u xxx


  • Unearthed-Angel
    August 26, 2007

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    Wow very emotional and powerful Kate...Are you ok??
    U can always talk to me remember that

    Luv Tamara


  • NyteShade
    August 25, 2007

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    a very powerful piece and full on. i love no mincing words here. I like the first stanza. nicely worded.