Out here in the wonder of creation
I sit in solitude
Listening to all the sounds that surround me
It all amazes me
And I wanna share it with the one I love
Who is in my heart
And in my mind
But not at present by my side
My heart aches for this one
To be ever present in my life
I do not need no other except my Lord
And the one I love.
Please tell me what you think
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its amazing to think of how we were created with all of space and everything that exists around us
its totally humbling
thanks for sharing with the rest of us!
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This was very sweet. I'm not sure about the use of the word 'wanna', though. It seems to cheapen the emotion a little - make it seem like something PCD would sing, hehe.
Hope you're well, hun. Merry Christmas. -
these new poems are awesome cara, love them, just makes you want to go aww
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