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Disappear

Can we disappear?
Can we disappear together?
Forget the world outside
And just disappear together
To a world that is only ours to explore
A world where pleasure is felt, where love is experienced
Can we disappear?
Can we disappear together?
To a world where no one misses us, to come searching for us
A world where happiness is gained, where love is all that matters
Can we disappear?
Can we disappear together?
To a world that is only us , forever
Can we disappear?
Can we disappear together?
Can we disappear together forever?

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  • Rachel Vargas
    October 23

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    very nice

    i once have felt this way wanting to disappear with him. i like the way you question and always continue to ask for more. very good poem keep it up.
    hope you read some of mine and tell me what you think
    Rachel