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You're, You've

I don't know how to tell you how I feel
You're the world to me
You're the sunshine in my life
You're the one my heart beats louder and faster for
You've captured me and made me feel alive
You've made the stars shine brighter
It may just be the way I see it all
With my eyes that are tainted by love
But you are my everything

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  • Rachel Vargas
    October 23
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    great write

    i love this poem it relates to feelings i have had again great write continue with the great work.


  • C.W. Bush
    July 9, 2008

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    :-) This was sweet, hun. Being lost for words is so frustrating but, at the same time, it's a rare person who leaves you speechless.


  • pixiedust13
    August 26, 2007
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    I know how you feel, been there, don't that. Loved the poem. Great write.