Holding you nestled against me
menagerie frail in my arms
intoxicating scented fragrance
fire burning ropes of refrain.
Plethora desires turgid pulse
pressing softly against my chest
your whispering breath sighs
encouraging whimpers warm exhale.
Sexual enticement tempting demur
melting candle light allusions
timid hesitations stirring fires
suggestive, carnal hot allure.
Butterfly flutters shivering heat
invitations engaging quivering desires
tacit beckoning surrender loosing control
your sexy eyes coruscate with want.
Bodies lust begin to betray resistance
pulsating thick thumping flesh sweats
my swollen hunger, in your fingers wrapped
pumping whispers of surrendering cries.
Tender touching love grappling grips
my love devouring your glistening flow
we give all we hold to unleash our souls
our hearts taking deep the others pounding beat.
In my arms against my chest
legs around me impaled on emotions
Moving about the place we are melding heat
my heart's afire, burning in your eye's
tonight I have you tight
really got a hold
got a hold on you .
Author notes
picture prompt
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A contest entry
- Sighs... by Celticmoon.
450 points, ended August 26, 2007, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pain or Love by XxESPNCHICKxX.
600 points, ended January 13, 2008, 82 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - PREWRITES!!!! by PerfectImperfection.
600 points, ended January 19, 2008, 34 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - BATTLE OF THE GOLDS 4 by Swan song.
2500 points, ended October 25, 2008, 36 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Well i may be able to breath some time next week
Excellent
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A lovely piece of intensity. Sensually radiant. Thank you for your entry & Best wishes in the contest!
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congrats on the gold! i really liked one! amazing flow! Good luck in the contest and have a happy new year!
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WOW
So romantic and beautiful. Increadible poetry you amaze me. I felt very involved in the poem and I felt like I wanted to be held onto at this moment!! Feelings enveloped my heart of love and uncontolable passion. The title is perfect and the first and last line completely are in sink with each other!! Great write!
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Yo David ~
Way ta go on the gold Bubba ~
Nice to see you around again ~
Bear ~
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thanks Bear
for your comment and the hiya
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lol this certainly deserves gold. terrific imagery
Tender touching love grappling grips
my love devouring your glistening flow
we give all we hold to unleash our souls
our hearts taking deep the others pounding beat.
simply amazing!
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thank you
so much for your kind words I am glad you enjoyed reading it
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THE GOLD!!!!!!GOOD FOR YOU! WOLFIE!
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thank you
Rose for you kind congrats
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This is extremely impressive!
To say that this set a blaze upon my screen and within would be an understatement. You have taken this to an amazing new height that just sends the reader on a journey none would care to return from. This is exquisite! Thank you for entering and good luck!
Blessings
Bel
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Thank you Bel
for the time running the contest and your kind remarks, coming from you I consider that quite an honor. I have gotten a little behind on responding to comments on my poems, I appologize and thank you for the Gold trophy
Best regards
David
aka Roaddgo Wolf
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Bonding Passion
Brother,dear brother, You have hit boiling point for hot on this one! And yet I give you credit you obeyed all the rules.From beginning to end,between descriptive words,emotion,passion,sighs, It is not hard to envision the scene. And the title and repeats of got a hold, really got a hold on you feels like it is someone you don't want to let out of your embrace. Very sensuously passionate, and yet very bonding in feelings.....Quite a work! Passionately moving!
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