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Idle City Dreaming

My compass' needle points
to far away shores and
remote distances call
fetching me,
my mind;
quietening my squall-cries,
and they drown, float,
transmogrify
into those of seabirds
flinging white-on-grey,
windy-winging,
stormbird-singing.

Rain dripping from pandanas
answers every need in me.
This solitudinal fancy
so suspends every day
in a dream that i walk
flattered city streets
strewn with crab-beads and coral,
seaweed and shell;
prints of bare feet.

It is no shame now to recall
youth and time,
the beach years
and the choral
of seabirds;
to recline
in an office chair
for a moment spared
in passionate fantasy
of wind and rain,
of tossed, foamy sea.









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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 30, 2007

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    to recline
    in an office chair
    for a moment spared
    in passionate fantasy
    of wind and rain,
    of tossed, foamy sea.


    this is the scene
    one should really
    just let be the train of thought
    and live the life of the
    beach scene

  • the chase
    August 26, 2007
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    This is beautiful :]