What you need, the doctor said to me,
Is a day of rest to feel your best
So take this pill, it wont make you ill
you'll wake up and sing, its then you should give me a ring
you'll feel like your unable to break, a diagnosis i am sure to make
So i did what the doctor said, and in the morning i woke up dead
Author notes
....its not happy...dont get mad at me for that. i hope you and your sister get kick out of it though.
A contest entry
- Weirdos of Wizdom by Baahltres.
634 points, ended September 10, 2007, 8 entries
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um, how can you wake up dead??
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a nice rhyme =]
but not so nice of a subject, great luck in the contest
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indeed, not the happiest... cute up until the end though
thanks and good luck in our contest
~.~Yvonne and Richelle~.~
Baahltres and Rikwin
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