I feel like a Hell
Things just keep blending in too well
I forget how to laugh
I'm so damn quiet
Really relaxed
It's all up to you
Talking all I can
To try to make it all okay
You've got a good point
You're walking around
I'm sitting alone
On this hollow ground
Gonna fall in and through
Fall in with you
Forget all I knew
But if only I could remember a little
It's just too late
Half past eight
And I'm drowning myself
In and out, coming through
Killing punch lines with a dusty mouth
How did you know?
Did you read my mind?
Cause it wasn't for show
I wanna sleep in your eyes
I wanna get out of here
I'm troubled with dosages
But you stole all the cures
I forgot myself, I left me alone
Couldn't concentrate
Time became slow
You criss-crossed you fingers
Making a fist
I was happily dying
But you made me exist
I failed with smile
You noticed that too
Your eyes went down
With this picture I drew
Author notes
I want to make it a song I think. Anyhow...My life in a weird little nut shell....Sort of. heh.
Based on a True story. :D
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Well it's certainly funny girl, how we relate to each other's writing! You could have easily taken this from my heart and mind and written it into your song...
I really love it, as I do most of yours. They are never the same, and always leave me thinking. You always have such unique and beautiful lines-"I wanna sleep in your eyes"-how beautiful is that?! I love it. I love this whole piece, I feel it.
Would love to hear some of your songs someday, so why don't you make a cd or something Or put some stuff online where I can listen Yeah, sometime. You've got talent, amazing.
Michele
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I was just considering that yesterday..All i would need is some type of recorder. See it would be good if i could edit something and add. Cause my friend plays the piano REALLY good. And I play guitar. I used to sing, but Eeeehh dunno. I did one song and i have a good rhythm for it and stuff. This one i haven't really decided. Thanks, cd..ahh. I wish. haha. One day maybe. And yeah, it is really funny how we relate, thats probably one of the reasons we never get bored with each others poems and stuff. hah. LOL well, thankyou! pow, ttyl.
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interesting
it is definatly 1 of a kind(for me thats a good thing)
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