WHEN I STEPPED OUT INTO THE BRIGHT SUNLIGHT,
THE SUN CAME ACROSS MY FACE,
AND THEN WITHOUT A TRACE ,
I FELL IN LOVE WITH THE SUNLIGHT,
IT FELT WARM ON MY FACE,
AND WITHOUT A TRACE,
I CLOSED MY EYES AND STARTED TO DAYDREAM,
WHEN THE SUNLIGHT CAME OVER ME,
IT JUST MADE ME FREE,
FREE TO BE ME,
FREE FOR ALL PEOPLE TO SEE,
BUT AS MY DAYDREAM PROGRESSED THE SUNLIGHT GOT BRIGHTER,
AND I BEGAN TO FEEL LIGHTER, LIGHTER, LIGHTER,
AND STILL THE SUNLIGHT BECAME BRIGHTER AND BRIGHTER,
AND I BECAME LIGHTER, AND LIGHTER,
WHEN I CAME OUT OF MY DAYDREAM,
I KNEW THAT THE DAYDREAM WAS ALL ME,
BUT THE SUNLIGHT WILL ALWAYS BE FREE,
FREE TO COME ACROSS ME.
A contest entry
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375 points, ended October 24, 2007, 39 entries
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Thank you for taking the time enter and good luck to you!
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This was a very good attempt honey ... I am glad to see that you are getting what you feel out in poetry ... It is a good way to express yourself outside of anger and frustration ... Very well written honey ... Keep up the good work ... and you will see yourself get better with time ... A little piece of advice ... Go look at other peoples poetry to get some inspiration .. And I am sure you will start flowing from the pen ... Very beautiful ... Love ya "B"
♥Sparkeh♥
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yhank u for the comant
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