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The End Of Never

Heaven would be to stay in your arms forever
could you just hold me until the end of never?
Caressing the softness of your beautiful face
would you care to spend eons lost in my embrace?
Wrapped together with each other we love to be
perhaps we should stay this way for eternity.
Thoughts of everything else forgotten as we touch
our bodies becoming entwined feeling so much.
Cuddling closer until we’re almost as one
where it seems time stands still and love has just begun.
Heaven would be to stay in your arms forever
could you just hold me until the end of never?

Caressing the softness of your beautiful face
would you love to spend eons lost in my embrace?
Nuzzling deep in the warmth of desire we share
our love is the only thing of which we’re aware.
Our hearts beat against each other in harmony
playing a melodic song for just you and me.
Whispering in the dark the words that lovers speak
knowing this perfect love we’ve found is so unique.
Heaven would be to stay in your arms forever
could you just hold me until the end of never?

Wrapped together with each other we love to be
perhaps we should stay this way for eternity.
Such a beautiful thing between us radiates
with the passionate magic our love creates.
Sensations of our breath on one another’s skin
an intense feeling so good it must be a sin.
Those longing glances that linger bring sheer delight
lost in our ecstasy in the quiet of night.
Each caress with just a hint of sensuousness
as we snuggle in closer for the perfect kiss.
Heaven would be to stay in your arms forever
could you just hold me until the end of never?

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  • daviscth silver member
    March 3, 2008

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    What a simply lovely piece of work and the background is so beautiful!!! Thanks so much for posting.


  • jcat gold member
    October 25, 2007
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    oh this is just gorgeous! I loved it! thank you for entering it and good luck in the contest.


  • rollingzen
    October 11, 2007
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    well done

  • Uncle Jimmy
    October 11, 2007
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    Beautifully done!

    The first verse says it all. Love like yours should last forever. Sex is important but cuddling, kissing and embracing your love is (risking sounding goofy) is the true measure.

  • hazydreams
    August 24, 2007

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    man I would like that very much. Gees I hope you are a man that wrote this. I love this piece alot. Very good read and write.

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