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My Minds Jumbled Mess

A little luck
Tuesday’s saint
The good girl war

The moment odd
Under time
A virgin in the fire

Of  Judas facing joy
Paid out lovers
The worlds spur a wrinkle

The girls companion
The good jar
She’s the Virus

Bladed birth
Black club cometh
Of omens perks

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  • xToxicxCupcakesx
    October 9, 2007
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    Huh?
    I like it but...I don't get it...and I read it like 5 times before commenting...


  • Seven Kinky
    October 8, 2007

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    WTF...??! *stares at the words in incredulity* Does this even have a meaning, Chrissy? If it does, it went RIGHT over my head. 0_0; Wow...that's all I can say...wow...


    • I Am Gun
      October 9, 2007
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      Well you see it was for a contest where I could only use certain words and it made no sense after I wrote it so thats why I named it my minds a jumbled mess...

  • Diatribes
    September 8, 2007
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    Third time I have read this, and I still don't understand it.
    But im not very intelligible.

  • the chase
    August 26, 2007
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    :]

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