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silent echoes

Listen….

Echoes faint to ear

Of voices spoken in inspired cheer

Sighing gasps to visions seen

Grand canyon walls

They whisper between

Shhhh…

Listen….

Do you hear them?



Spirits cries of beauty found

Listen closely

Ear to ground

Hear the whispers, distant drums

The wind of silence

Here it comes…..shhhh…

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  • princessleejwctlvr2
    September 9

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    This is truly a beautiful piece so truly incredible and I love the picture of the grand canyon!! I love the way you wrote and portrayed this piece!!!!


  • Whispering Wind Moderators member
    April 3

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    From the silent whispers of days gone by, if you will but listen you can hear the soft cries, of the distant drums beating out the true history, of lost lands and family...for the silence of he hills know everything

    Just breath taking na hetane...a haunting feeling from the past nemehotatse for you


  • Rose Angel gold member
    August 26, 2007

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    Excellent Write!...Masterpiece of Thought!

    This is glorious, Mike! Listening, being still we hear things, the quiet things, we get creative ideas, wisdom, and yes we may hear spirits, and God's spirit speaking! I love this....shhhh..I have seen the Grand Canyon in winter and it is still beautiful..Our native people, would put their ear to the ground for listening to distant horses or war parties coming, the buffalo.....This is one of your best...because it touches my spirit! Excellent write!


  • Providence
    August 24, 2007

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    Wonderful...Like the wind whishing through the white pines the echoes of spirit can be heard even anticipated!

    Wonderful write.
    (loved the swishy background too!)

    Marianne


  • Celticmoon
    August 24, 2007

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    Mike you truly have captured exactly what I heard and felt as I stood upon those very mountains in Sedona last year. Wind echos much there and if you listen closely the messages that are heard are amazing! Thank you for entering and good luck!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • CarolDesjarlais silver member
    August 24, 2007
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    Oh, my goodness, this is simply gorgeous..spiritual...yes, that is the hum I speak of.....


  • Celticmoon
    August 24, 2007
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    The prompt is: Grand Canyon Whispers



    OR



    The picture on the main page

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