Faces that flush,
Eyes half closed.
Hearts that beat,
Hands..sweaty..hot.
Hair caressing redened cheeks,
Trembling mouths that don't speak...
Excitement,elation,a deep burning fire.
Timidly she rises from her bed of roses
Averting her eyes from his wanton gaze,
Hearing his breathing quicken...
He watches her every move,
Standing awkwardly, hands dug in pockets,
Trying to hide his bashfulness,
Reluctant to speak..to her.
She who is so meek,pure,an untouched flower.
Look!
There she glides down the green velvet hill
Hoping he will follow.
He follows...
His innocence wearing thin.
Running after her down and down to the bottom of the hill
Until-
In silence they sit together,
Drowning in each other's eyes.
A contest entry
- Romeo, oh Romeo! by Xx Luna xX.
300 points, ended February 21, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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Well done about the first love which is an true experience that I believe we all could relate too...
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What an amazing write of first love. I so loved all the emotions within your poem. Wonderful imagery and flow. Keep up the amazing writing
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Oh my, the first flush of young love, I wish I could remember...damn.
Nicely captured...
Suz
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