It destroyed me
Each time you hit I fell
Each time you moved I crawled
You made my life a living hell
You captivated me
That sly smile
That gleam in your eye
To you I was no more than something vile
I was nothing
A fallen dream
Caught in a trap of your extremes
But I found the key
You no longer hold me
Please tell me what you think
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This is powerful...great job!!
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powerful & moving
very powerful and moving, it made me want to throw a
luscious dinner and dance to loud music and laugh loudly
and go buy an outrageous pair of shoes!
Thanks for your poem! Loved it!
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