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I will get the Cheese! {Silver}

The fastest mouse in Mexico,
Speedy Gonzalez is his name.
Whenever meeces wanted cheese,
they called on Speedy and he came.

Señor Gato guarded the cheese,
he thought he was slyer than sly.
That didn't stop little Speedy;
getting the cheese, off he would fly.

Taunting ol Gato constantly,
"andale arriba!", he'd say.
El Gato I will get the cheese,
because to me this is child's play.

The meeces planned a fiesta;
music, dancing and cheese galore.
Señor Gato heard the ruckus
and pounced right upon the dance floor.

While everyone else ran off;
Speedy said Señor Gato, please.
You can't catch Speedy Gonzalez
and you know I will get the cheese!


Joyce Le Lievre
(sunny day)

© Joyce A. Le Lievre, All rights reserved
August 24, 2007

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The picture is courtesy of google image search:
http://literature.sdsu.edu/nericcio/1andalespeedy.jpg

I created the background using a picture from google image search. http://www.fi-donc.nl/artwork/wb/j-classicspeedy.jpg

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  • C.I.M.A Punk
    April 11, 2008

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    It's a cool poem about our favorite mouse. The flow is good and the rhyming is good too.
    Andele, Andele, keep up the good work!


    • sunny day
      April 11, 2008
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      C.I.M.A., Thank you for the applause and the lovely words of praise. Little Speedy thanks you too. LOL I'm glad you enjoyed this one and thank you for stopping by one of my older poems. Love and God bless, Joyce


  • Sandygram
    September 3, 2007

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    Wonderful Poem

    Hello Joyce, Well this was such a delight to read this morning. You have penned a wonderful children poem. Very cute and funny. It definitly deserve to be with the winners. You take care, Sandy

    • sunny day
      September 3, 2007
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      Sandy, Thank you so very much for the lovely words of praise. Speedy was always one of my most favorite. I'm very happy that you enjoyed it so much and humbled by your compliments. You take care also. Love and God bless you my friend, Joyce


  • Matt Holck
    August 26, 2007
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    the couriers a super hero &trademark;

    • sunny day
      August 26, 2007
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      Matt, I have credited the sites used for the images here and I am not using them for profit. They are solely for private use on this site. I think that all poets here recognize that. I hope you enjoyed the piece. Love and God bless, Joyce


      • Matt Holck
        August 26, 2007
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        the word super hero is trademarked by maval and dc
        only they may use the word to sell product


      • Matt Holck
        August 26, 2007
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        they deserve credit
        good for you


  • Amera gold member
    August 25, 2007

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    Wowee! I love this! It's adorable! The background it wonderful too. If it’s alright with you, I want to print this and take it to the hospital with me. I’d love to see this posted in pediatric tics.

    Love,
    Amera ♥

    • sunny day
      August 25, 2007
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      Amera, Thank you for the applauses and your lovely words of praise that you gave to me for this one. You most certainly have my permission to post it at work. I love Speedy Gonzalez, so this was a very fun one to write. And learning to make these backgrounds to go with them is even better. LOL Now I need to figure out how to get my background over to Word when I copy the poem there so that I can print them out with the backgrounds attached. I'm very happy that you enjoyed this one. Love you my friend, Joyce

      • Amera gold member
        August 25, 2007
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        Make sure you are in Internet Explorer. Go to the 'Tools' pull-down menu across the top of the screen, and then select 'Internet options'.
        A dialogue box will pop up. Select the 'Advanced' tab and scroll down to the printing options, indicated by a printer symbol.
        To print the background items, make sure the 'Print background colours and images' box is checked. Alternatively if you don't want to print the background items make sure the box is unchecked.
        Click 'OK' to close the dialogue box and confirm the new setting.


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 25, 2007

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    lol, yep that is how it went in those cartoons, you did a great job on this, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest


  • Ray Von
    August 24, 2007

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    Ahh, my dear aunt, you rock like speedy does!!! This was so hilarious and sweet I laughed and laughed and laughed!!!
    Good luck in the contest!!!
    MAria

    • sunny day
      August 24, 2007
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      Maria, Thank you ever so much for your words of praise and that "ñ" I got to copy. LOL You my dear niece are the one who rocks! Always keep your sense of humor and don't forget that positive that you mentioned. Thank you for the best wishes also. Love always, Auntie Joyce xoxoxoxoxo

      ANDALE! ANDALE! ARRIBA! ARRIBA!


  • mommyof2
    August 24, 2007

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    What a great read for a good chuckle! Speedy is one of my all time favorites.

    • sunny day
      August 24, 2007
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      mommyof2, Thank you for the applauses and I'm very happy I could give you a chuckle here. I was laughing the whole time I wrote it. I would picture Speedy as he took of shouting those words. He is super. Love and God bless, Joyce


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    August 24, 2007

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    Lmao you did well

    I absolutely love this one, you penned this with such humor and some in spanesh!! like the way ol speedy flies to get his share lol,thank you so much for entering our contest, good luck....

    • sunny day
      August 24, 2007
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      SH, I always loved the Saturday morning cartoons and I still love the old ones. Gosh! Speedy was one of my most favorite of all of them. I love that andale, andale, arriba, arriba! He sure did frustrate el gato! hehe Not only was it fun doing this poem, this was a background I most definitely enjoyed making. You brought me some wonderful memories and I thank you for hosting this awesome contest. You inspired me with that stained glass image of Tweety that you have and I hope you will use some of the backgrounds I have now started to make. Thank you for the best wishes. I think I will have some cheese now. Love and God bless you always, in all ways. Joyce

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