God and Goddess, hear my plea
I wish for protection over me
as I wake and breathe each morn
You've been here, since I was born
Now, each day, guide me, I ask
as I face each and every task
In every aspect of my life
May my heart be free of strife
And should I suffer in anything
May you take me under your wing
and heal me, of any possible pain
and wipe my cheek, where tears stain
Keeper of all in the universe
free my mind of things, perverse
Open my heart and eyes to see
and feel the positve energy
I bring you offerings and gifts
a token, for the bad, you lift
and the goodness, that sets me free
All come from the powers that be
And keeping with the Wiccan crede
taken in all the words I read
"And it harm none, do as you will"
And in this vow, peace, I feel
So, Mote It Be...
Author notes
I chose option 5. for this contest...
In a list
A contest entry
- Inspired by Art by Twilight4Eternity.
900 points, ended September 2, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Pagan Poetry by Carpe Noctem.
525 points, ended October 8, 2007, 15 entries
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900 points, ended July 3, 18 entries
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Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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#good.. not hood...sorry
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really hood work of art you have here, i enjoyed it. so much power.. wow.
you are a very gifted writer, keep up the amazing work
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Wonderful
First off congrats on the well deserved shinny gold!! I really like this poem just a fabulous write. It was really hard to find a favorite part of this poem as it was all great. I really like the rhyme and it flowed great. I think my favorite part was,
Keeper of all in the universe
free my mind of things, perverse
Open my heart and eyes to see
and feel the positve energy
Just a awesome write all the way around, congrats and keep them coming!! -
i really loved this. amazingly pened. thank you for entering.
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This poem has the feel of an "As I lay me down to sleep" type poem... it's very masterfully written! Well done!
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I like the view you have. I used to be a Christian and now when I thank my goddess, it reminds me of praying-just w/o all the other christian stuff- and it helps me understand what it is I'm really doing. I love that this piece is asking for protection. Thanks for entering.
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Awesome
If I were a practising pagan this would definitely be my ceremonial opening prayer!
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A powerful prayer. It speaks for itself.
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WOW! This poem is GORGEOUS! A real awesome piece of work!! I could clap all night for this. Really enjoyed the rhythm of this. Felt like a song and my heartstrings were dancing to its tune. A most beautiful effort on your part. I liked the rhymes a lot.
Merry part and Happy Samhain,
Charishma
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amazing
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Magnificent!!
Powerful piece penned and what energy brought forth~
Loved this!!
One that I imagine has been heard~
Thank You for sharing this one with us!
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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I love the idea behind this poem, the meaning. I like the title too. There were times the piece seemed a bit choppy and I think there could be some smoother transitions throughout the poem, but I enjoyed reading this and really appreciate the entry. The picture you chose is my favorite
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beautiful
I admire your prayer/poem....I love that it is a positve protection chant.....beautiful pic...good luck in your contest!!
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Awesome Jeremi......
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