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My love for you

When everything's all said and done
There's still all this work to do
But one thing that hasn't changed
Is my love for you
The world is changing
And the seasons do too
But the one thing that's true
Is my love for you
Don't say it's all over
Just because we're no longer together
There's nothing that can ever change
The way I feel when you're around
Though the times are changing
And the seasons turn cold
I'll never forget the things that you've said
And maybe someday we'll see each other again
Hope is really an important factor
It's a reason to live
It's a reason to try
I hope to have a reason to give
There's nothing I can help with
Except with giving advice
But along with my love
I'll send you a dove
So before you go forgetting
That I'll just push you aside
Remember that I'll help you through
All the hard times you'll go through

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  • WhiteRoses
    November 6, 2007

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    This is really, really good. Ive started a poem im working on now for my boyfriend that is kind of like this. We havn't even went out for a year, but Ive known him for about two and a half years, going out on and off for a few months at a time in between that time. I have a feeling he is the absolute one though, considering I'm so young most people would think that I'm crazy. We've had our ups and downs and our hard times just like it sounds like in your poem, but we always help each other out. This poem is an inspiration for anyone.


  • prettygirlsduncry
    August 30, 2007

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    I know I haven't talked to you in forever....but know that I am married now...And have been way to busy for words! LOL! But I love this poem it is very caring...its how I feel about my ex to this day! LOL So well...keep in touch! Loves


  • Izzy Devil
    August 24, 2007
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    O.o love love someone i should know about? hmm? lol its great so j/k on last part

    Your poem is very soothing but you dont gotta worry about me i made the choice i gave the option im fine... i cnat say im all fine cause i do miss the fact i could be your one and only but hell if fate means us to be lovers then well see in the future now wont we darlin.. btw the rhyme scheme is tre magnifique