Spinner of the wind
nudges Mankind towards greater...
Productivity.
Learn more about me and my poetry at:
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A contest entry
- Haiku Time by bethan-gaze.
750 points, ended August 29, 2007, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Fabulous
I love the title Windmill and then the first line your a spinner of the wind pushing you forward to greater productivity. Congradulations on you trophy! I loved you words and message in your write. Thank you for sharing with me and thank you for your kind comments on my poetry as well.
Blessings
Kelle Marie
stavykm
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Haiku is so hard to review because it feels strange to give an analysis that is longer than the haiku is. You gave us a complete logical thought. Good work.
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This is such an interesting poem. I loved it. You expressed worlds in just three lines. Good luck in the contest.
Write on.
~*~SP~*~
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"Spinner of the wind" is a wonderful opening line ... a lovely way of alluding to a greater being as well. I like the way you interpreted this! Best of luck in the contest!
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GOOD!
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