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What Lies On The Other Side?

Where does our universe end?
is there some great wall
or  high fence encompassing?
what do you think
is on the other side?

Does it go on forever?
could Heaven lie just
over the threshold
of  its cosmic door?

I believe we are separated
by a  few  remaining ticks 
before we go up
in a big bang,
since the atom bomb 
reared its ugly head
and evolved into a
more hideous monster;

I hear old man time as he weeps,
afraid he may not be able
to procure  another year,
his gnarled hands
extend to Earth’s womb,
a stillborn lies  breached ;

His hands will rise in surrender
to the feared midnight hour,
when he goes cuckoo
unable to fly away.

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  • Play Pretend.
    August 25, 2007

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    Good Job.
    i love these lines :


    I hear old man time as he weeps,
    afraid he may not be able
    to procure another year,
    his gnarled hands
    extend to Earth’s womb,
    a stillborn lies breached ;

    Good Luck and Thanks For Entering.


  • Play Pretend.
    August 24, 2007
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