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Grey Whispers

Memories that will not fade
of loving and living, sharing as one.
Your words, the calm to my once
storming heart.

As I sit here, grey and pondering,
I can feel your touch upon my shoulder.
You've always been here for me,
and today is no different.

Though the music has died, and you are gone,
I still hear your whispers in my soul.

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Prompt: Whisper, though the contest picture helped too.

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  • Asfand
    August 24, 2007
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    sad and beautiful! much luck!

  • Riftkin gold member
    August 24, 2007

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    this is beautiful my friend,
    just a soft tenderness
    and the wonder of a touch
    pass the grave

  • In Too Deep1 gold member
    August 24, 2007

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    Very comforting take on the prompt. Memories are forever whispers that bind us together for a life time.
    Thanks for entering

  • Scented kiss
    August 24, 2007

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    oh this is very beautiful but sad at the same time, good luck in the contest

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