Smiles, laughs
kisses and cries
that's what childhood is all about.
Summer rains, colors in sky
blooming flowers
nature welcomes with open arms.
First love, first kiss
warm hug, tenderness
my world is complete with you...
A contest entry
- MORE HAIKU ANYONE? by Swan song.
800 points, ended September 8, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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interesting three here
and I liked them all
for you did a wonderful job
Riftkin -
You violated the form completely here and yet I think you created some at least very haiku like images. that is very good I will read this again




