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Disconsolate Nude

Crumpled up,
Like used wrapping paper on Christmas Day morn,
But with less joy,
The nude dons lingerie-
An old gift from a former lover.
Seeking solace,

She traces the patterns,
Where once he used to kiss, tasting her,
Before he gave a taste of loneliness.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    August 30, 2007

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    Hmmm I like this one
    for the thought of someone
    being there and then gone
    Dom as gone and sub alone
    makes the subs wish to do
    better to stay on the good side

  • the chase
    August 26, 2007
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