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Sliping Away

O, intoxicate me, let me breathe
the devil's flames, to make me feel,
new again.

It's been soo long since I could dream
and I am eager to go back, to
where memory and dreams, join as one.

So forgive me Lord for being faint
and take this one off the record,
I wish to pull a curtain over
not be blinded.

Because I dare hope for better.
And it's just as fake and fulsome
as she was.

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  • TheRoughDraft
    August 24, 2007

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    Its good, its kewl that i know what its about. Theres elements of what happened in this tangled with nice imagery.

    "let me breathe the devil's flames" i like it!