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Haikus Natural

golden leaves flutter
in the chilly northwest wind
a robin flys south

short summer shower
cools and refreshes the air
rainbow high in sky

slowly rising sun
sparkles the dew in the grass
raucous rooster crows

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  • Swan song gold member
    September 8, 2007
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    Very good I enjoyed these and will read again


  • maggiejamespoet silver member
    August 24, 2007

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    Love your words and love your haiku--they paint a haiku picture, every one. Good luck in the contest!