a black winged hawk
and a brown singing tree
they listen to me talk
and watch over me
they watch us fight
they hear us shout
I know it aint right
with out a doubt
I remember the days
of love and touch
now your in a haze
and I don’t care much
you broke my heart
right in two
ripped apart
because of you
so I say a final goodbye
and look in your eyes
I used to see an ally
now I see a disguise
what happened to your love?
tears fall from my face
and float to heaven above
or is that just empty space?
I look at you as I walk away
your beautiful black hair
those eyes that betray
and your face cold and bare.
and my black winged hawk
and brown singing tree
watch her and gawk
at what she could be
Author notes
gasp
Scars by Papa Roach
a poem about how someone can betray you no matter how much you love them...it can happen.
A contest entry
- For My Favorites Only: The Top 10 by Under Construction.
450 points, ended October 3, 2007, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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snaztasticallyinclinableimaginableemotionallytruthfullhonest.
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pretty sweet :]
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This is sooo good. I loved it. It was real deep and just had great emotion in it. and the hawk and tree thingy was awesome. This stanza and these coiple lines were awesome.
what happened to your love?
tears fall from my face
and float to heaven above
or is that just empty space?
watch her and gawk
at what she could be
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Uh...Gasp? Can you put your username in the author's box please! Thnxx. Great write. Almost better than the actual song!
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yea its gasp sorry i keep forgetting lol
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It's all good.
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