The girl was running,
Far far away,
Her screams hiding in her mouth
Her eyes darting away from the piercing judgement of strangers.
Bruised.
Author notes
This was an example i used ina comment that i made up and i actually liked it when i re read it so i thought id post it as a few lines. Maybe to be edited and made longer in the future. What do you think?
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