Golden spikes splatter yellow onto skies,
Chasing the Nimbus away from the frame;
Succulent petals of blossoms salute
Chivalrous rays battling Gods of the night.
Somewhere, swallows erupt welcome to morn,
Ancient cherubs morph, blooming butterflies.
Nightly chill melts into dewdrops of dawn,
Blushing, Earth embraces warmth of the Sun.
Author notes
Picture Prompt - Morning
A contest entry
- Sunrises and Sunsets by PureCountry.
875 points, ended September 9, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Loved It
Short but powerful. There is alot of imagery here in such a short piece. well Said and Done! Good Luck and Thanks for Entering!
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WOW this is just fabulous
your words leaves me in awe beautifully penned piece you written here I enjoyed reading this allot thank you
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Glad you liked the poem... I enjoyed writing it too
Thanks for stopping by and taking the time to read and comment! Have a great day...
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It was my pleasure
sunflowerbeauty thank you for the read
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Simply lovely poetry here, an adoration to sunrise and the beauty of the natural world, excellent use of imagery, wonderful expression. Thank you for this fine entry into the contest and best of luck in the judging...PK
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@Peteskid:
Thanks for the contest, happy to know you liked my entry
Hugz,
Sunflower.
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Beautiful
This is so beautiful and peaceful. I love watching the sun rise over the horizon each new morning. You have painted such a lovely painting for all too see. Just brilliant. Good morning my sweet daughter
Mom
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@Tawk
Thanks so much Mom, so glad you liked it. TC and have a great day!
Love,
Sunflower.
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