hazy morning light
reflecting on calm water
new chapter begins
as parched timbers fell
begging for nature's mercy
heroes doused the rage
amber sphere of light
shadows obscure fishermen
lamp post waits to shine
In a list
A contest entry
- MORE HAIKU ANYONE? by Swan song.
800 points, ended September 8, 2007, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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this is so good
the beauty of nature,even at its worst can be so serene,but yet devastating, firing light is ambers with heat behind it,good job,good luck in the contest,MM
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The very last haiku I think s the best it has a clear Aha! moment ot it. Over all these are not bad and I will read them again
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What a lovely haiku chain - the third stanza is my favourite! Really lovely images. x
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