Searing blades and
Fragile flesh,
The blade mesmorising
its captive
Enjoying the pain
Entertained at the
Blood seeping out
Causing demented
Smiles
Depression, a deadly
Disease causing
Blade enjoyment
Leaving scars of pride
Loving the facde of
hope we build
Hypontizing ourselves
and placing faith in a blade
Releasing the pain
through self mutilation
killing ourselves a little
everyday for false merriment
building and tearing down
our own facade
In a list
A contest entry
- Pain, Shame, and the hollows of the heart. by metal freak 13.
450 points, ended August 24, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - A contest for the masses by Danneh.
600 points, ended October 4, 2007, 34 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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*entertained
You did a really good job with this piece and your imagery is beautiful. Great job, and good luck in the contest.
-Danneh<3(Built a wall around herself, let the blood drip from her fingertips, and smiled when the world said it was okay) -
You well expressed something hard to tastfully express. I applaud you.
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