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Dawn Sunrise~

Smiling like the dawn sunrise
Staring like a morn surprise
My cute little cuppy cake
Wanna go for a walk by lake
Or you want to run near beach
I knew from your face so peach
Run run run I want you to win
No no cheating dear its a sin
Oh!I see you won the race again
Champion lets go home it's gonna rain

Author notes

This is for my sis.though naughty attimes.She still is a cute cuppy cake
Sounds like a little babyish poem I know..But I just love d it so posted to share with you all

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  • Mirthryl
    June 24, 2008

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    Cute nickname, "Cuppy cake." Where kids get their nearly limitless energy from is one of eternity's mysteries! It's sure cleaner than fossil fuel (unless they're still in diapers!) Thank you for your entry.
  • Beanbiscuit
    October 8, 2007
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    This simple and sweet little piece brightened my screen. It's very pleasing to read it.


  • parth
    October 4, 2007
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    very cute

    hey...was a nice...sweet piece..full of innocence..loved it...tc
    PARTH...

  • Mujtaba H Zaidi
    September 15, 2007

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    Beautiful Poem

    It is a great piece of literature little maiden with gorgeous techniques and literary skills. Congratulations!


  • Nra
    August 26, 2007

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    It's not babyish dear, it's sweet, childlike and beautiful...brought a smile to my face...needed it...so thank you

    • Princess-nee
      September 7, 2007
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      lol happy to know that someone smiled after reading a poem of mine.tc
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