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I Repent!

You are the clutch of my dangling dreams
You are the crutch of my limping soul,
I feel more than regrets to all my sins
You need more than remorse to cleanse my hands,
Oh Father, with all my heart and soul, I repent!

I’m down on my knees and cry these tears
Bow my head as I’m asking for Your mercy,
From now on ‘til my flesh turns to ashes
I will give my life forever to Thee,
Oh God, with all my heart and soul, please forgive me!

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    September 2, 2007

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    I will give my life forever to Thee,
    Oh God, with all my heart and soul, please forgive me!

    I love the honesty of the sentiments which is indeed very rare ..and submit my thanks for such a warm and lightfilled entry in my contest.


  • Amera gold member
    August 25, 2007

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    This is absoultly beautiful. It's more of a prayer than just a poem. It flows well and expresses the passion that you have for God and His power.

    Love,
    Amera ♥