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Sunrise Together

while we were sitting on the beach
watching the sun rise together
holding hands and wishing
that this could last forever
in your arms I felt so strong
as two hearts beat as one
the moon was slowly fading
the sky was brightened by the sun
you leaned over and kissed my neck
and whispered in my ear
as long as I  am by your side
you’ll never shed a tear
you held me tighter in your arms
and gently stroked my hair
your fingers gently grazed my cheek
armani code suffocated the air
I laugh at the kiss that grazes my check
then slowly over my lips
your hands shifting back and forth
between my thighs and hips
then I wake up alone
a dream of us again I see
but next time I am sleeping
please don’t wake me

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  • Abstract Image
    August 24, 2007
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    this poem was really strongly written and i loved the way it flowed...good luck