When it gets too high
I start the laughter
When it drowns me in
I double over.
When I try to catch it
It slips right out
And when I get it rid
It comes again and about.
It's a drug that's way too strong for me
I can't afford it either
I don't think it'll fit in me-
I'm not a good reciever
I lost control and modesty
And though I try to I can't lie
But I think that this time I swallowed
Three summertime butterflies.
They mix and match positions
Like circus play inside
They make me feel so dreamy different
Yet ever so alive.
A sweetass sickness
A lively death
Taking sanity
A friendly theft.
It's a pull that's way too strong for me
I can't afford it either
Don't think i can keep myself in one
Can't hold my mind together
I lost control and modesty
Never thought I would find a perfect guy
But I guess that this year I swallowed
Three summertime butterflies.
It changes my outlook to positive
I can now forget the bad
At least for now it's gone
Since sanity is now past.
It's a curse that's way too strong for me
I can't afford it either
Don't know how to unbless this spell
Still, I enjoy this fever
I lost control and modesty
I'm in love and can't disguise
Now everyone is noticing
I swallowed three summertime butterflies.
Author notes
JULzz- ROLaa option 5
A contest entry
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I really like this poem. My favorite lines would have to be: It's a curse that's way too strong for me
I can't afford it either
Don't know how to unbless this spell
Still, I enjoy this fever
I lost control and modesty
I'm in love and can't disguise
Now everyone is noticing
I swallowed three summertime butterflies
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aww that is very sweet. I think someone is in love. congrats. GREAT WRITE. Amazingly written. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck.
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this poem is soooo freaking awesome! good job
and good luck
your made up word is:coolandawesomlywicked
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