Perhaps, Someday
Maybe, Might
Sooner;later, things feel right.
Time will tell as pages write
The passing day, the moonlit night.
The clinging grasp of crippled time
Living days that once were mine.
Listening to an essance of memories
Endless as the rolling waves
Lost in the eternity of what was
And never more shall be.
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I wrote this months ago, but I haven't written anything in a while and wanted to post. I think it's kinda choppy though...
Too short? Too choppy?
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How do ya do it?
Wow wow wow that was amazing. The whole thing is incridible but that second stanza blew me outta the water. You need to post more often. Hope all is well with you.
Tu hermano de Jesus Christo,
Angel
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Lol. I'm not sure if it was all that. I just really wanted to post something and I did though it's not really finished. I'm good, thanks. And you?
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Know how ya feel.
Your style has always been your own, so no, not to short or too choppy. The word is "concise" or maybe "Succinct". Good flow. -
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Shy
Thanks. It's good to hear from you.
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