She walks her own road,
day after day,
cold and alone,
no one in her way.
Broken Girl, they call her.
Her emotions seem cracked.
Her face seems stiff.
No one knows why it's emotions she lacks.
They avoid her,
they never return her blank stare,
and they wonder
if something used to be there.
And while she sits
and rests her feet,
someone might ask with concern,
"Why is it you never speak?"
She might look up
and give you that blank stare,
but no one gets an answer
while they are there.
But they do see
something others do not.
Emotions are not what she lacks,
it's the one thing that she wants.
Author notes
My name is Rainy Days. I hope this is what you were looking for.
A contest entry
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425 points, ended September 8, 2007, 59 entries
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I did want something like this. And i have days where im just like that...I like the rhyme scheme that you used. I liked how the words flowed wonderfully.
Thanks so much for entering. I deeply appreciate it -
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I'm glad you liked it.
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