raven hair and laughter
cartwheeled
along banks of moonlight
and kilometres flipped
themselves askew like
yesterday’s calendar
pages in wind.
In a list
A contest entry
- Breathless... 10*30*20 PIF Quickie by sunflowerpoet.
300 points, ended August 24, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - pif - Enter your best quickie pre-write by tara wilson.
1200 points, ended September 20, 2007, 36 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quickie Quest ~ Prewrite Party 2 by Namita.
300 points, ended October 6, 2007, 95 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical comments are most welcome.
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Very beautiful and yes, these images left me breathless! Congrats on the recognition, Blue
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WOW. SO wonderful. Thank you.
Luv,
~Candy
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Thank you, I love this.
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Another trophy? This time it’s gold! Being awed by your poems is nothing new anymore because as I read each and everyone of it.,. It seems that they are all awe-inspiring nature poems. There is no doubt about your talent my friend. Guess you use cartwheeled for a second time, still can’t get over how that word manages to fit this poem perfectly.
It’s all good…
-Blanche
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oo, the flipped kilometres leave me hanging on the wind and blow me off my feet in a good sense
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Wow. The first paragraph - perfect. Just leaves me speechless.
You're far too good, my dear.
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Excellent
Terrific poem for the prompt. Congrats on the gold.
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I love the word 'cartwheeled' in this, its just such a strong iamge.
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This is cute
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wow great write good luck
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Great job! I absolutely enjoyed this, especially the last verse. Thanks for entering, and Good Luck with the contest!
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