Do we live life as an everlasting line, constantly and always in sight of a beauty, a certain calm, a wonderful point in a journey? How often do these moments float past as we're so busy searching?
Life is not a hunt to achieve material goals.
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LifeinGrey
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I couldn't agree more with the
last line.
This is very thought provoking
as there's so much wisdom in
your words..
Impresssive ~Pastel
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This is a really good question.
nicely worded. but i think it would be alot better if you made longer and more in prose style.
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I love this...This is so true in so many factors of life...The desire to get to the end of the road, find our answers or meaning..then turning back to sadly realise...the journey is a blur.
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Yeah, if only we slowed down and paid attention to what matters, live in the moment once in a while. Ahh well.
Thanks for commenting. =)
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i would like you to please put name in authors comments.
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Done, I think? New here, not sure if I did that correctly.
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Thank You.
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