I look to the sky, I search for the truth
And feel the earth beckoning me to dance
As the rain falls gently upon my face
From this end of a rainbow, I see hope
The wind takes my hand, the trees take a bow
The grass is enchanted beneath my feet
Beauty and wonder serenading me
From this end of a rainbow, I see hope
The distant thunder, the rustling of leaves
Water's gentle rhythm beating ashore
Full chorus is nature's soft melody
From this end of a rainbow, I see hope
Splashing in puddles, twirling in the rain
Dancing for the promise of a new day
I see the sun peek out from the clouds, and
From this end of a rainbow, I see hope
Author notes
Lupus Luna form
A contest entry
- New Poetic Form by Amera.
1000 points, ended September 6, 2007, 13 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Elements by BlackSwan.
900 points, ended June 17, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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very well done! beautiful imagery and endearing message.
great job
-GL in contest -
THIS IS YET ANOTHER BEAUTIFUL WORK OF ART
YOUR WORDS FLOW ACROSS THE PAGE
WOW YOU IMAGERY
EQUISITE LOVELY WRITE
GOD BLESS...
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Thank you so much for reading and for your comment! I truly appreciate it and will be back to return the favor! We clearly have something in common
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a good piece of poetry you have written here, i have not seen this form before i don't think, i like the repeating line being brought into each verse.
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Wow, beautiful, and it gives me hope. I love all the nature imagery in this, and the theme of a rainbow. You did the form wonderfully!
Thank you for entering the contest.
Always,
Cassie
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This is absolutly beautiful with wonderful flow and perfect use of the form. I know rockerchkpoet will love it. This is full of image and motion and makes me want to smile.
Love,
Amera ♥
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Ah...This reminded me of my friend who performed a rain dance and thus there was a rainstrom. That was actually today. This was beautiful, I loved the title too. ItS enchanting, it makes me feel like i should be out in the middle of a field doing some cool dance before it rains. Lol.
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This is a beautiful piece of writing. Lovely imagery, and the repetition works great. It is a hopeful piece Well done and good luck in the contest
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