Mirages take shape,
The sun heats up, the night cools,
Deserts make great men.
Blue birds, red robins
color Christmas snow, won't run
Fly proud under stars
Snow in September
New Yorkers still shoveling
Below Ground Zero
A contest entry
- MORE HAIKU ANYONE? by Swan song.
800 points, ended September 8, 2007, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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poem with Haiku possiblities
but each part must stand alone
Riftkin -
It is difficult to make a haiku which is very much in my opinion a poem about nature into a patriotic poem. These are very good images, The last poem stands ou the most and I enjoyed it very much
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Lovely...you've said it all in 51 syllables
Ruth
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Very nice. Very thought provoking! Good luck in the contest.
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