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The Key

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A Woman's heart holds a key

 not in her chest

but in soft whispers of love

laid across her breast.

 

The touch on her cheek

or the small of her waist

promises of love

that you won't fake.

 

 

Fall deep into her

twist and turn;

ignite fires

and watch as they burn.

 

Never be reckless

or fickle with fate,

she asks only for love,

never for hate.

 

Heaven is yours

 you'll hold the key,

don't leave her empty

and

she'll set you free.

 

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

 

Author notes

I couldn't help but think about all the good qualities in Wanda.. Thank You beautiful for your wonderful presence in my life..

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  • Night Hope gold member
    August 24, 2007

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    "A Woman's heart holds a key
    not in her chest
    but in soft whispers of love
    laid across her breast."

    Sighhh...Ahhh, Cat...what a lovely, thoughtful, honest portrayal of a woman's heart...& how sweet you are to have penned this beauty in my honor, Sweetie...You are such an elegant Soul, my Friend...Thank you so much for YOUR presence in MY life, Lady...It is a blessing I am most thankful for...Congratulations on your honorable mention, Dear Heart...I'm glad you wrote a soft & loving piece again, Sweetie...I don't think it's strange at all...I think it was inevitable... Wanda


  • HeavenScent4U
    August 24, 2007
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    what a beautiful dedication for wanda. your words are so heartfelt and tender just like her heart. she has nothing but love for anyone who has ever been fortunate enough to cross her path and you have clearly displayed that her on your canvas. best of luck in the contest. be well and be blessed

  • Cat gold member
    August 24, 2007

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    such a gentle reminder of who wanda is to all of us- thank you so much for making wanda feel so special.

    m

  • Zayra Yves
    August 24, 2007
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    This is beautiful.

    The image you have paired with it is just gorgeous!


  • arafura gold member
    August 24, 2007

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    soft whispers...

    Well written and so very soft and gentle! You speak the language of love very well!
    Good luck in the contest!


  • Ogreatbaldone gold member
    August 23, 2007
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    such a soft and gentle poem Cat, not what I expect from you I enjoyed this as much for itself as for the fact that you are writing...peace and love to you my friend Terry


  • Nicolette gold member
    August 23, 2007

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    "Heaven is yours
    you'll hold the key,
    don't leave her empty
    and
    she'll set you free."

    This one touched me, Cat... so beautiful it is. I so loved the gentle and soft-spoken quality of this poem. It paints Wanda, and it paints you... it paints all real women. Beautiful - I know Wanda will so appreciate and love this poem. Thank you for writing her presence.

    ~ Nicolette


    • Catressa gold member
      August 23, 2007
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      It is very strange for me to write a soft love poem.. But for her I brought that out in me again.. Trust me it took a while.. Thank You Nic for your sweet comment..



  • bluecollarlove
    August 23, 2007
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    The key to your heart
    lays gentle in hand
    My softness impart
    a soul of a man
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