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Spring Cleaning

No, I don't want to change you,
but you wouldn't grow
if you didn't, and stayed the same.

No I don't want to change you,
but reality is that
the point of living is to become.

No, I don't want to change you,
but you will evolve,
and you'll say that I'm to blame.

No, I don't want to change you
but, truth be told,
you, at least, gained some new wisdom.

No, I don't want to change you,
but, more than that,
I mostly don't want you to change
me.

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  • Arizona Sunset
    September 6, 2007

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    excellent flow, great imagery, and I especially love the first line, and the ending line, because this is so true to life! GREAT JOB, thank you for a wonderful read...

  • mangledDawn
    August 25, 2007

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    This is so great! very relatible, and the repitition makes it easy and fun to read. great job!
    ~m


  • Payne and hate
    August 24, 2007
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    Love it