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The Unholy

We thrive in the dead of night
When things are not what they seem
When dreams become nightmares
And Demons come out to play

We sing songs of hate and pain
The ghostly tunes Dance around the liar's moon
Pale and frighting faces shine through the darkness;
Our past lurking up on us


We commit things most would run away from
Stupid things, that are so proud
Loving our sins
And loving each other

Rolling with the punches
And trying to keep on our feet.
Falling further with every step
Already so far down we can't see the light

Choosing our own fate
After submiting our wings
And tossing our halos
Hating what they stand for

Trying not to remember how it use to be
We take the long road
One that has more hardships
Hiding from our memories and accepting our fears

We have never had the happyness others have had
Serving our god, lord, and savior

We are the unholy


























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  • total20clutz
    January 21, 2008

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    I like this piece. It is very moving and it makes a point. It it absolutly amazing. It moves really well to.


  • imegrant wolf
    September 1, 2007

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    you just amazed me in this piece ... i didn't know that you would write somthing sooooo deep like this ... i had to read it too maney times to understand it .. i need to read it more ... amazing ... i can't help my self read it too much ... "We thrive in the dead of night" amazing piece
    "We commit things most would run away from
    Stupid things, that are so proud
    Loving our sins"

    its all amazing ... its very strong .. its attached to itself .. i told you u will write very good later .. we need to talk about it too much later ... take care