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Blessed Garden (haiku)

scented slumber smiles
blossoms open with rapture
bees appreciate


mossy green birdbath
silent in the summer sun
a plum falls in... plop!


roses queens of all
smug blooms capture attention
cat respects vile thorns

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  • R S Adams Jr silver member
    September 10, 2007
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    nature with humour...

    ...I smiled when I read this poem. It has a vivid imagery, and well done alliteration.


  • Swan song gold member
    September 8, 2007
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    I like th emiddle haiku the most You captured the aha! moment with the plop of the plum. Well done


  • individuality gold member
    August 28, 2007

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    bees appreciated lol i misread it as beers on my fist glance a good piece, i like haiku chains more than on there own


    • Emerald Lass
      August 29, 2007
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      HAHAHA!! Beers!!!! Lol

      Well, read it as beers... funny as all heck.


  • Melodies
    August 24, 2007

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    Oh, I do love these haiku so much!

    Beautiful writing, dear poet! Haiku is not easy and you make it look that way with these breathlessly lovely lines of supremely well penned images!

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