A lover, a friend
Permanently etched
Onto the inside
Smothering me
As only you can
Love me from
The inside out
Cover me
With yellow kisses
Dull my senses
Until I can
See only you
Fragile as glass
I wait for you
Only you will do
Nicotine craving
...you satisfy...
A contest entry
- 10X50X30 PIF QUICKIE by Acidanthra.
600 points, ended August 23, 2007, 4 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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lol..this is great - so true of addiction
Thanks for your entry
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This is a very sweet poem with a lot of scope..but perhaps the line breaks are a bit too much. You can have more words on each line which would make the flow much better
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well done on the prompt on an inside outside idea just as the tar smothers the lungs and gives one a jaunticed yellow look. good luck
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NICOTINE STAINS ON THE HEART is your prompt. Good luck!
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