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A Smoker's Child

Wondering,
   
      worrying
       
              hoping...

where's the next breath?

The challenges abound

heartfelt, for many children

Coughing continually
      contagious sounds


The odiferous reeking smell

    your wheelchair, clothes, and hair

A lifetime living Hell....



The physically challenged are
most affected; poisoned by smoke

Breaking my heart
        bringing me to tears

precious children always



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Prompt:
~NICOTINE STAINS ON THE HEART~

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  • Acidanthra
    August 23, 2007
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    NICOTINE STAINS ON THE HEART is your prompt. Good luck!