Bare skin shameless, the verses bare of unneeded folds of complexity
Beautiful with the stark pallid tones of skin and light
Metaphors and similes the gentle folds and wrinkles
There and up front an ode to knowledge
Of basics and elementary day learnings
Author notes
Inspired by the contest here http://allpoetry.com/contest/2366108
But I don't think that it is what was wanted so I shall not enter it.. but I still like it.. even if i'm unsure if it's done or not. Any suggestions wanted please.
Please tell me what you think
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Simply lovely
This was wonderfully innocent and yet sexy at the same time-couldn't work the link, why didn't you enter it?
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I wasn't sure if it met what the hoster of the contest wanted so I didn't enter it, and i do beleive teh contest got deleted Thanks for reading
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